"Prevention is better than cure"
Out of countries health budget , a large portion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays epidemic and endemic diseases are fundamental issues of medical world. It is considered that, out of annual medical budget some portion should be allocated to promote health education and to guide general population to opt preventive methods instead of regular treatments. I believe, such practice will carry positive impacts on overall health of the community.
To begin, active treatment has always been considered as the cardinal element of a healthy society. It is argued that, most of the epidemic diseases are water borne. These disease require active measures to overcome. Thus, promoting health education has a limited role in this case, thereby, resources should be invested in hospitals and health institutes. In addition to that, distributing the annual health budget in various categories will effect health professional's net income, therefore, such steps would upset the established order. Subsequently causing riots and strikes amongst doctors.
On the contrary, encouraging health education has very fruitful effects on the overall community. First of all, some of the common fatal health disorders can be prevented by performing minor tasks. To illustrate, during early 1980s in India, radios and television channel ran commercials regarding the benefits of mosquito nets in preventing malaria, at the beginning of 1990 malaria rate dropped by 65% in tropical zones of India. Secondly, health education promotes healthy life style and it eliminates risk factors of infectious diseases, for example China faced on of the most horrible epidemics in the form of Cholera, and this condition was abolished when people were informed about the use of fresh and clean water.
To conclude, although medical treatments are of significance. I believe, that health education is far more important and it must be supported by governments financially to improve health condition of the entire nation.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
These disease require active measures to overcome
These diseases require active measures to overcome
will effect health professional's net income
will affect health professional's net income
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 293 350
No. of Characters: 1581 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.137 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.396 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.774 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.319 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... on overall health of the community. To begin, active treatment has always be...
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Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'These diseases'?
Suggestion: This disease; These diseases
... the epidemic diseases are water borne. These disease require active measures to overcome. Th...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ealth budget in various categories will effect health professionals net income, theref...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...teps would upset the established order. Subsequently causing riots and strikes amongst docto...
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... riots and strikes amongst doctors. On the contrary, encouraging health educ...
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Suggestion: some
...on the overall community. First of all, some of the common fatal health disorders can be pr...
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Suggestion: one
...tious diseases, for example China faced on of the most horrible epidemics in the f...
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...t the use of fresh and clean water. To conclude, although medical treatments...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276595744681 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.151975683891 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.127659574468 0.0946595960268 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0334346504559 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0182370820669 0.0437548338989 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127659574468 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0547112462006 0.0403226058552 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83275628109 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273556231003 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0699088145897 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00303951367781 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1930.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.58703071672 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.498293515358 0.374742101984 133% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.37542662116 0.28420135186 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266211604096 0.203846283523 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17747440273 0.137316102897 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83275628109 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 74.6520982709 60.7387585426 123% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7372847829 49.517814964 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.0759954494 49.1944974215 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.25373134328 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288649017936 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.057765074656 0.102741220458 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0515486924865 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489458661023 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183731860278 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115542904142 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644104574889 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328920020916 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0272719411157 0.0638462369009 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221506778889 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380208988439 0.058150111329 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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