Nowadays, there are many articles talking about incredible rising in crime and how to punish. It is said that prison is not good way to rehabilitate some people. Even it just educates them in the ways of criminal. Personally, I think prison is the best penalty for serious criminals.
First of all, for the majority of crimes, they are appropriate to being in jail. Mainly so that the victim would be safe from further harm. Take a murder as an example. To be accused of killing means he can not be allowed to roam free and of course not have chance to kill or harm someone else. Prison sends out a strong message to would-be criminals.
Secondly, I completely agree with this statement is that a number of inmates are actually a danger to society. A typical example of this is domestic violance. A man who is father or husband often tends to be an offender and sufferers are mainly his children and his wife. Without being in jail, the offender has his freedom, he easily tends to humiliate and violent his victims who are always unable to make self defense and to be lack of concern from their communities.
However, some people argue that taking away one's freedom is just about the worst thing can do to a human. It is considered to be ineffective, as a high percentage of prisoners re-offend once they are released. It seems clear that another answer needs to be found. The problem is that the alternatives, such as community service, are often as soft option.
To sum up, I support letting most lawbreakers receiving prison. It is absolutely strict discipline, but it is necessary to keep society being safer from deliberate illegal act.
- Some people think shopping online is better while other prefers going to the shops Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- You recently moved to a big city and have decided to write to a friend from your neighborhood Write a letter describing life in your new city and your feeling about the change 72
- Some people think shopping online is better while other prefers going to the shops Discuss both views and give your opinion 50
- Some people think shopping online is better while other prefers going to the shops Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Prison is the best punishment for criminals To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, of course, such as, talking about, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67931034483 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61284897879 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5539501115 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4210526316 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127063780129 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396066707364 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541768448047 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06397949624 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378153394192 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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