Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, most effective solution is to provide a better education.
Agree or Disagree.
Nowadays, crime is increasing day by day and in some countries prison is the very common way to reduce this problem whereas education is most effective way then prison others think. I partially agree with the statement and going to discuss both views in looping paragraphs.
There are number of reasons that education is the best way to reduce crimes in countries. The first and the foremost reason is that, if people are getting knowledge then they definitely become aware about the bad happening and this is without any doubt beneficial because, when they get aware of crimes and they know what will be the result if they do so then they might not commit crimes. For instance, people do not know that having sex below 16 years of age is crime. That's why they do so. At the same time the other main reason might be unemployment. Like, people get education, they definitely get Job opportunities. This is without any doubt beneficial because the main reason behind crimes is that people are not educated and they need to do something to survive. So, if they are busy in their work and having good jobs, then automatically crimes may be reduced.
On the other side of the argument, prison is also a good way to reduce crime. the main reason behind this could be that if the person is put behind the bars who committed crime and be punished very strictly, due to which the other person become aware and always think twice before committing any criminal activity. Moreover, if the person is behind the bars and the other people are aware them crime would take place any more in the country and also the country becomes crime-free.
To wrap up, I would pen down by saying that, education and prison both are the good ways to reduce the crime. Because both are the things due to which people become aware.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63862928349 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32081164068 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482866043614 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9415194601 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168514420348 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637902189234 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801440954528 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131543158639 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982552960663 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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