The problem of overpopulation on environment

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The problem of overpopulation on environment

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
... to the most densely-populated regions. Consequently it had led to the negative impact on th...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o the negative impact on the environment ,which now includes extremely harmful eff...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...since 20th century and annually doubles.On assumption of this all the essential re...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... resources such as fossil fuels dwindle.In addition it must be mentioned that some...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...sources such as fossil fuels dwindle.In addition it must be mentioned that some of the r...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e.In addition it must be mentioned that some of the resources are not renewable, thus there...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...tor concerns the issue of verdurization.As the number of people increases, there i...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ery hard efforts. Hardly did humanity tackle these unstoppable problems separa...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...n order to follow it all the next years.While solving these problems government needs...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
... all the next years.While solving these problems government needs to include their fund ...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...ding to their fundamental abiding place.With assistance of this distribution the wor...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ce, although it is not easy as it seems.The more humanity make efforts, the better ...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
..., the better result will be. To sum up,this problem is actual for not even one deca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19665271967 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97681028709 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.584062863 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.25 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154617139026 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733701753537 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741651715381 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828664463984 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972564949855 0.056905535591 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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