The problem of overpopulation on environment
The problem of overpopulation is connected with the migration of the plethora of people to the most densely-populated regions. Consequently it had led to the negative impact on the environment ,which now includes extremely harmful effects.
The first and foremost is that population have been rising since 20th century and annually doubles.On assumption of this all the essential resources such as fossil fuels dwindle.In addition it must be mentioned that some of the resources are not renewable, thus there is no guarantee in future saving of them
The next significant factor concerns the issue of verdurization.As the number of people increases, there is an extreme need for them to use trees as a basis of satisfying their needs. Permanent tree cutting might be recompensed with very hard efforts.
Hardly did humanity tackle these unstoppable problems separately. The first thing what people must do is to have the initial plan on order to follow it all the next years.While solving these problems government needs to include their fund to reimburse lost oxygen which was consumed and to rank people according to their fundamental abiding place.With assistance of this distribution the world will get a balance, although it is not easy as it seems.The more humanity make efforts, the better result will be.
To sum up,this problem is actual for not even one decade. In consequence the position deteriorated twice and in case of not doing anything the world will die.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19665271967 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97681028709 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.584062863 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.25 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154617139026 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733701753537 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741651715381 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828664463984 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972564949855 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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