Public health responsibility of the government or the individual?
Some people think that public health in a country can be improved by the government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are a lot of arguments about should governments or individuals concern about public health. therefor, there are some people believe that public health is the duty of governments only, and they should focus on beneficial diets. However, other think that the public or our health is our responsibility, we should manage our health and control what we should eat in every day.
Governments are the most significant influence on the market nowadays. The reason is that governments are the authority who can control the economic role and also manage public health, they can make laws in food prices and other products in countries. Therefore, governments are the most aspect that can enhance public health. For example, governments can control Junk food that effect to our health that causes many diseases such as obesity, hypertension and cardiovascular disease. Governments can impose limited food prices or make tax on junk food and also can help agriculture by bright money to improve farming and also improve public park for people to have better equipment or safe pate to run.
However, people should concern that their health doesn't depend on any agencies or any governments because it is your health, it's about your body will good or not. Furthermore, it will be easier than waiting for someone to take care of ourselves. And, it will contribute to our socialite that they will improve every public thing by themselves.
In conclusion, governments, everyone should concern that it is importance and they should take care of their health. Therefore, governments can impose laws involved with junk food prices. And people should take care of their health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefor
...ndividuals concern about public health. therefor, there are some people believe that pub...
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Suggestion: in everyday
...r health and control what we should eat in every day. Governments are the most significant...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...people should concern that their health doesnt depend on any agencies or any governmen...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... governments because it is your health, its about your body will good or not. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19188191882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68914334797 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479704797048 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1540894061 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440414045687 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165110957412 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796059072637 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258974267979 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828855453125 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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