It's a great threat for each and every nation to face an ample number of crimes and each has its own laws and orders to limit the mishaps. Some people are on the opinion that caging until death can be the best punishment for life-threatening crimes as taking one's last breath is considered as a sin. In my opinion, equalizing crime and punishment is the best choice as it makes sure justice and less number of crimes in the society.
To begin with, there is an ample number of people who have got a soft corner towards criminals like murders as the other individuals do not have the authority to take the life of others. Those counterparts further explain that by grading the best available form of punishment makes each citizen in the same category. So they put forward to imprison then followed by counselling and job oriented training which will give them a chance to lead a better life as it is provided in some of the western countries.
Admittedly, opting different modes of punishment than life sentence has many benefits, I do believe that the best possible punishment for murders which is death penalty has far more reach since it makes sure justice and controlled number of delinquencies. To put it in another way, if a country follows proper punishment system it will make fear and a motive to control the misdeeds among them. In many of the Middle East countries, for example, a life sentence is given to many for gruesome activities from the public places and other people are allowed to take footage and spread. As a result, recent studies show that the number of crimes in their regions is extremely less as compared to other nations. So it makes sure justice and peace rather than being involved in crimes.
To conclude, although individuals are not authorised to take away once life for murders, I truly believe that life sentence is the best way of bringing the most determined society.
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- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents an 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its a great threat for each and every natio...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'limiting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: limiting
...es and each has its own laws and orders to limit the mishaps. Some people are on the opi...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lead a better life as it is provided in some of the western countries. Admittedly, opti...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...imes in their regions is extremely less as compared to other nations. So it makes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72754491018 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57883864623 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2727499585 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.583333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205737312015 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718147271205 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563507101185 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122410115282 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287136991964 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.