No one can deny, each and every person busy in their work and they do not have a time to spend with their near and dear once. Nowadays, this issue become a subject of heated debate. I will give the appropriate reasons of this issue as well as it consequences.
To commence with, in recent time, people want a successful life. Rationality behind that, person give the whole time to work or job. Today, cut-throat competition rapidly rise among the employee. Everyone want success in the job and achieve the repudiate position in their field. Which lead to, people devote the huge time to work and give the very less time to family. Secondly, Although, some people do their work at workplace, but they also do office work at home and as a causes they never spend the time with family or friends. For example, owner and entrepreneur want their business to grow so, they do work twenty four hours. Alongside, employee also do the office work at home their are many causes but, according to me, mostly employees follow the instruction of their boss or supervisor. As a consequence, people unable to spend the time with their relatives.
Moreover, today each and every person have a lot of pressure of work and they do not give the time to family. As a result, this things spoil the relationships among the peoples. Apart from this, this is become a cause of divorces. To explicate, many of couples busy in their own works and they do not have a much time for communicate with each other. Thus, they destroy their beautiful relationships. In some cases, parents have a numerous responsibilities of work and they never give the time to their children. Some parents also missed the childhood of their child during their busy schedule.
To conclude, work is important for survival but people should be give the time to their family or friends. Because, during the busy schedule people lost their relations as well as, couples also took the divorced because they do have a enough time for spending with each others.
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...ample, owner and entrepreneur want their business to grow so, they do work twenty...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72364672365 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51987819584 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3211925044 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9523809524 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327716079965 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110313543776 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072565648655 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230662132068 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193779521913 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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