No one can deny, in this modern era, shopping bags highly used by the human beings. This bags generate the numerous crisis on earth. A large part of populations reckon that, plastic bags should be banned by the government as soon as possible. I complete agree with this statement. In further paragraphs, I shall put down the appropriate reasons.
To commence with, each and every person used the shopping bags which made by plastic materials. As plastic bags are lightweight as well as it is very cheaper rather than other kinds of bags, so people give the preference to used plastic bags. Therefore, environment problems are rise rapidly day-by-day with the more usage of plastic bags. More precisely, plastic bags never destroy so it create the pollution in environment likewise if people try to burn this plastic bags so it produce the harmful gases in the air rationality behind this air is polluted. According to my perceptions, lack of awareness is root of this problem. So, people must be aware about this serious crisis and try to reduce the utilization of plastic bags as much as they can.
Furthermore, this plastic bags also become dangerous for marine and terrestrial animal. This bags ate by the animal as a consequence, daily number of animals are died. To instance, according to previous research, terrestrial animals like turtles are ate this plastic bags because this bags are low weight and they think it is jelly fish so they ate it. Researcher claim that, this plastic bags is the main reason of death of turtles. According to my perspective and experience, plastic bags become more harmful for animal. Today, having a dire need to remove this plastic bags in order to prevent the environment and animals. Government should be made awareness programs and educate the people about this crisis, with the assistance of world high authorities which do the work for environment protection.
To conclude, it is apparent that this serious problem generate with the high usage of shopping bags. So, people should be reduce the usage of this kind of bags. Government, nevertheless, organize the awareness programs with the help of those organization who do the job of environment. Thus, environment problem are reduce with this little steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.016 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70801280155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.715907647 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240443286324 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821272926643 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422594139295 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162883510261 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297507413509 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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