Nowadays technology level allows us to buy anything through the internet. Many and many people buying through the internet. What is the advantage and disadvantage to them buying online and companies to set up an online shop system?
For consumers, it is more convenient to buy online. Because they no need go out to shop and walk around to find goods. They can buy anything on the internet by using the index finger. They can have more time to do what they want, like, working, cleaning, taking a nap, etc. Also, they can buy in anytime, no need to worry about the close time of online shop. On the other hand, buyer need risk the quality of goods since they cannot touch and smell it through the internet. In addition, we only can use a credit card or electronic cash to pay, notes and coins are not impossible to play online. Moreover, our personal information may hack by somebody if the online shop has a poor security. And we cannot get the goods immediately, due to seller need time to pick up and delivery goods to us.
Why do companies choose to set up an online shop system?What is the benefit behind? They can prevent for shoplifting and robbing because it is more difficult to break into a warehouse. Besides, they don't need to hire fewer employees than a real shop and no need pay rent for it. Therefore, they can lower the management cost. Moreover, they can have a wider source of customers since they don't have the regional restriction. People can buy in anywhere. Nevertheless, there must have some disadvantage over there. They might have a decrease in a number of customers because of malicious comments or goods damaged during shipment. Also, it is costly to them, if the do not maintain the server well.
To conclude, online shopping makes us more convenience, we can buy in anytime, anywhere. But we need to worry about the security of online shopping and the time we get to goods. And for companies set up an online shop system can also lower the cost of management and get more customers. They might get trouble when customers decrease.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230215827338 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.158273381295 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0503597122302 0.0946595960268 53% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0455635491607 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0695443645084 0.0437548338989 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0959232613909 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0167865707434 0.0403226058552 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54049733875 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0479616306954 0.0326793684256 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0119904076739 0.00163938923432 731% => OK
Determiners: 0.0815347721823 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0383693045564 0.021408717616 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119904076739 0.011925033212 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2072.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 366.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66120218579 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289617486339 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210382513661 0.28420135186 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16393442623 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114754098361 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54049733875 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483606557377 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.8527574846 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.64 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6609002269 49.517814964 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.88 127.492653851 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.64 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.814263465372 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 35.6782513661 49.1944974215 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.25438596491 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41202319404 0.332605444948 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0965579021828 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0750948008278 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.430692513332 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130755498851 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133991402418 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830178614461 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443791667306 0.324371583561 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631300493212 0.0638462369009 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30604504309 0.228012699653 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297636724524 0.058150111329 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.