Question: Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around
the city.While other prefer cycling.Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Being in this 21st century personal vechils are amplified in all the major
metropolitan cities of the world compared to early days,where people make
use of either public transport or a bicycle to commute from one place to
another.Some pepole hold the opinion that,the bestway to travel in the
cities are by a car,while other group of people argue that efficient and
cheapest way of communting is by bicycling.In this essay the modes has its own
advantages as well as ill effects which will try to enunciate below.
There are multiple reasons why humans perfer cars over a bicycle for there
journey in the cities.Firstly,nowsdays due to hetic schedule of everyone
is extremely busy,they cannot spend much more time to reach
their workplace while cars are the time savers for everybody.Secondly,
we can travel easily on any weather condition and important work can be
finished on time.Whereas,cars is more comfortable to travel any time in
city.For instance,in mumbai,trains take around two hours to travel from
thane to bhandra west.However,this journey time can be reduced to half by
using a car. Therefore, this it is advisable to drive a car for meeting,both
personal and professional.
Opponent inhabitants argues,that a cycling is an efficient option to travel
in the cities because of various logic.First and foremost, it is environment
friendly since a cycling does not consume any of the fossil fuel.If more people
utilised it there will be reduction on pollution level and it will be solved
completely.Moreover,a cycling is cost effective as there is a minimal maintance.
Futhermost,indubitably,pedalling is considered to be one of the best excersie.
For example,the UK government has made necessary steps for city dwellers to
use bicycles as a mode of transportation for shorter distances.by doing this
will help to reduce the carbon emission,and also helps to keep society fit.
To recapitulate,no doubt to travel in a city both the modes has its own merit
and demerit.I personally opion,it is up to each individual to tak decision,
which transport is convenient and efficient for them to travel in a cities.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34985422741 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67252521533 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.099843223 49.4020404114 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.142857143 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 20.7667163134 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103808801344 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470261796349 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395656649388 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0262594475068 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405784555166 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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