It is predicted, that modern media such as TV, Internet will destroy radio as a medium. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this prediction. This essay will state my opinion and will support it with examples.
For old age, radio is essential part of daily live, such a news delivery, pleasure or making atmosphere in bar, restaurants or when driving car. Wireless transmission of sound as a breakthrough in society development, have been transferred from big boxes to the small portable playing boxes, which could be powered just by batteries. Since that, people are allowed to carry music, news or political discussions broadcasted by radio anywhere, where radio reception is available. In The World War I and The World War two, when modern media did not exist, all vital information for public or soldiers, have been publicaly or encrypted into codes delivered by radio.
Therefore modern media such as Internet or Television become part of our daily life, our society, from kids to eldery depends on radio. We listen radio everyday, even we are not aware about this fact, in restaurant, when having dinner, in cafe, when ordering coffee and in many other occasions. Great example of radio use is driving. Drivers switch their car radio on to get access to news, traffic situation and for pleasure, when listening music.
To sum up, radio is for generations vital part of our lifestyle, used more or less. Modern media could replace its used, however, there are still situations, when radio get us access to news and music while modern media can not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ypted into codes delivered by radio. Therefore modern media such as Internet or Televi...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ldery depends on radio. We listen radio everyday, even we are not aware about this fact,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion, more or less, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97328244275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59449074075 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6502788921 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17973137569 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697413770533 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699655747789 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119269583309 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547691098996 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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