A radio will no longer be able to hold its presence as TV and internet,media will replace it soon. Do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics:

A radio will no longer be able to hold its presence as TV and internet,media will replace it soon. Do you agree or disagree.

In the era of television,it is true that the popularity of radio may reduce bt I am disagree on that point radio will completely lost their place in future.Before invention the TV,it was radio that entertained the people and in the modern world people completely use internet

Television and internet is the full source of entertainment in modern World.As we see that In 21st Century radio shows at some places not on every places bt it is wrong thing thay radio will completely lost their place.If we talk about modern inventions like TV,computers then no doubt that are the wonderful sources of entertainment bt we can't carry these sources to another places.As radio is very compatible In size and small to bring everywhere.Moreover now radio available in mobile phones,computers and cars also so people who are going to long distance they prefer to listen the radio.Moving aheas,In today's world there are new radio channels available from which we can gain lot of knowledge whereas genual people always prefer to listen the radio because radio contains lot of knowledge about world besides people who hosted the radio channels their voice is very good and feel like a melody and sometimes they crack very good jokes by through our body become very relax.

Overall,I already mentioned that radio will not completely disappear In future.Radio is available in every essential things especially in mobile phones.That's why we can't ignore radio completely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, no doubt, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13445378151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9144524198 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 119.0 20.2975951904 586% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 532.5 49.4020404114 1078% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 611.0 106.682146367 573% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 119.0 20.7667163134 573% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.5 7.06120827912 517% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164214298674 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135606830687 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157375127544 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137118456612 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313823520621 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 62.2 13.0946893788 475% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -49.31 50.2224549098 -98% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 49.7 11.3001002004 440% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.79 8.58950901804 149% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 49.6 10.1190380762 490% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 50.0 10.7795591182 464% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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