There is no doubt about that nowadays majority of teenager leads to the crime. Certain educators believe that lack of socialisation and feeling between children and parents or tutors are main reason behind it but to some extent i agree with this statement.
It is commonly seen that these days both parents are working for setup their economical status due to this hectic schedule they do not pay attention towards their children. In the absence of their father and mother they indulge into criminals or other bad activities. One example of this in America almost every parents leave their children in the child care centre while they are working. Moreover, teachers also play integral role for betterment of children future. But they majorly focus on study subjects such as science or mathematics instead of taught them moral and social value.
Apart from these another factors also considerable that leads to the violent crimes. In the movies or video games depicts many conflicts, fights and negative role of people which are easily follow by the youngster and they also become like them due to this they take part in criminal activities as well as addict to the drugs. In addition to this, in the schools youngsters make wrong friends then they choose wrong path also take part in bad activities.
In conclusion, i think that only parents and tutors are not responsible for this there are some other factors are considerable that’s push teenagers into crime.
- The Recent figure shows an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and tea 56
- The Recent figure shows an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and tea 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5806437612 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7793417518 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.333333333 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23038823366 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106417335295 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026869887831 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129614778643 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191010897714 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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