In recent years, lack of exercise has emerged as a significant problem for many people. Therefore, individuals seem to suffer from various issues. In this essay, I will explain reasons and solutions for this problem.
In this modern world, individuals rarely do exercise, this leads to a massive problem because it causes many diseases. People prefer to watch TV and using mobile phones for much more time. Furthermore, eating fast food and consume numerous fizzy drinks, hence it is created a principal downside for a number of aspects. For instance, obesity, it is increasingly spread among public in these days regarding reduction of doing sports, and stay without moving for along of time. In addition, this can destroy one’s mindset and lead to serious problem.
On the other hand, to reduce the bad effects, it likely to take an essential step to tackle this concern. Individuals can arrange schedules for various activities every day. As a result, following the plan can improve their physical performance. Also change their bad habits to be more creative and effective well on other life sides. It is a right decision to recover the path of unhealthy system to be healthier in many ways especially eating habits. So, it must take a new measure to alleviate the issue.
For instance, governments can motivate people to participate in race for donation activities, this could be beneficial to achieve great achievement. Moreover, they practice sport.
In conclusion, doing exercise can enhance others for healthy lifestyle and healthy mindset. Therefore, I believe this could reduce illnesses and a number of more problems in life.
In recent years, lack of exercise has emerged as a significant problem for many people. Therefore, individuals seem to suffer from various issues. In this essay, I will explain reasons and solutions for this problem.
In this modern world, individuals rarely do exercise, this leads to a massive problem because it causes many diseases. People prefer to watch TV and using mobile phones for much more time. Furthermore, eating fast food and consume numerous fizzy drinks, hence it is created a principal downside for a number of aspects. For instance, obesity, it is increasingly spread among public in these days regarding reduction of doing sports, and stay without moving for along of time. In addition, this can destroy one’s mindset and lead to serious problem.
On the other hand, to reduce the bad effects, it likely to take an essential step to tackle this concern. Individuals can arrange schedules for various activities every day. As a result, following the plan can improve their physical performance. Also change their bad habits to be more creative and effective well on other life sides. It is a right decision to recover the path of unhealthy system to be healthier in many ways especially eating habits. So, it must take a new measure to alleviate the issue.
For instance, governments can motivate people to participate in race for donation activities, this could be beneficial to achieve great achievement. Moreover, they practice sport.
In conclusion, doing exercise can enhance others for healthy lifestyle and healthy mindset. Therefore, I believe this could reduce illnesses and a number of more problems in life.
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- In recent years lack of exercise has emerged as a significant problem for many people Therefore individuals seem to suffer from various issues In this essay I will explain reasons and solutions for this problem In this modern world individuals rarely do e 61
- Nowadays many people do not exercise enough What problems can lack of exercise cause What can be done about it 61
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...can improve their physical performance. Also change their bad habits to be more crea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72553020461 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627819548872 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4017984564 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490773960324 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138412681625 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149103954398 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288152326509 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227753385915 0.056905535591 400% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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