In recent years, the number of crimes committed by teenager in major cities throught the world is increased. Discuss this issue. Give reason and suggest some solutions.
In the recent era, crime rate is proliferated. Juvenile delinquency are increasing very rapidly in every metropolitan of the globe. There are many causes as well as remedies of above mentioned situation. Thus, both induces and proposals are discussed in following paragraphs.
There are many reasons behind the increasing number of crime among youth. To begin with, media is a paramount in this activity. Media shows crime scenes on television by seeing those scenes children's vulnerable mind try to imitate that which is some time results in to a crime scene. Secondly, nowadays, nuclear families are exists in society, in early days grandparents take care of their grandchildren they also teach them moral values of life but due to nuclear family, now children are sit at home unattended as the both parents are working. Some time this unattended youth try to involve in crime activities as there is no one to look after them.
On the other hand, there are many solutions to control this global trend. First and foremost one is that, government should regulate the media. To illustrate this, if the content of the media is controlled by government then children will never see any type of misleading criminal activities on television. Secondly, school can play pivotal role to alleviate the crime rate among teenager. If the school added different subject in their curriculum by that they can teach children about different moral of the life and how to become a good citizen of community. Moreover, parents should also monitor their offspring's friend circle, so that they can restrict their near and dear ones before involving in any criminal offence.
To put in nutshell, I pen down by saying that, increasing number kids indulging in crime is a major threat around the world albeit, it can be reduce by taking various step by school, government and parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sat'.
Suggestion: sat
...due to nuclear family, now children are sit at home unattended as the both parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05501618123 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66155604161 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6786811306 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136952021051 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464251514216 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465965274693 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822430004603 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336455910513 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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