In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in large cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest?
The rise of crimes among young people is an urgent problem that need to be properly addressed. However, to find an effective solution, it is necessary to discover what has led to this happenning. In this essay, I will first examine the reasons for this and propose some possible measures to tackle the problem of rising youth crime.
Perhaps the principal cause of high level of crime among young adults is the increased use of alcohol and drugs. Many big cities have suffered from the phenomenon of binge drinking by teenagers who lose control under the influence of alcohol and commit crimes. For example, it is a common sight of the streets in Vietnam to see fights breaking out outside pubs and nightclubs. At the same time, the rise in youth crime can also be linked part to the drug abuse. It is unfortunately the case that young people see drugs as cool and become addicted to them. This means that they may decide to resort to petty theft or other criminal acts in order to pay for their habit.
There is a variety of solutions that governments and local councils could take to mitigate or eliminate these issues at the first place. One simple option would be that government should introduce a stricter system of penalties and punishments for those who break the law. This will surely be able to reduce the number of criminals among the young as it can acts as a deterrent and show dangerous law-breakers that their actions have negative consequences. However, I believe that improvements on education is the key solution to help to reduce criminal lifestyles among young people. If students are well-educated about the dangers of a life of crime, and what would happen to those who lead that kind of life, they will have to consider more about their actions and less likely to commit a crime.
In conclusion, while there are more and more young offenders in cites due to the negative effects of alcohol and drugs, one approach governmets could take to address the youth crime is to educate young learners more effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
... of criminals among the young as it can acts as a deterrent and show dangerous law-b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76836158192 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51943829944 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556497175141 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6087597615 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223390026207 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698297068702 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433271235726 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130582059768 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512670880912 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.