Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that juvenile deliquency who involves in acute crimes need to be received the same punishments as the mature perpetrators. In my vew I completely advocate to this notion in order not to subvert the stability of the society.
Many people have bitterly opposes to impose severe punishments on young lawbreakers because everyone is deserved a chance to handle their previous mistakes and make new starts. they also believe youngsters may be beter off after a long time stucked in incarceration and gone through rehabilitation as well as educational training. However, this explanation is a bone of contention for many decades due to the booming in recidivism among young . Some wicked pesonality traits and thinking ways are being influenced by in the environment where they live, others are heritable nature in genetic structure. Therfore, it is a difficult tasks to modify on's characteristics.
Apart from that, young adults who had reached the adolescence age have fully recognizant of their wrongdoings, but they commit crime without considering about the repercussions. On the other aspects, looking at the problem as the victims' perspective, they have to suffer from painful aftermaths, physically or mentally and the scars, sometimes can't be eradicated. As a result, the serious crimes need to have a tangibleas connection with extreme penalties, regardless of their age.
In conclusion, youth offenders who are attending grave illegal activities need to face the harsh penalties in the same level as adults because they need to be in charge of the effects arised from their incorrect behaviours without any tolerance. it is not only a way to stabilize the society but also a threatening lesson to the young generation.
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- Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults Do you agree or disagree 73
- Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is the best for the individual and for society Do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28417266187 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08720145289 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7875666058 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0431009826201 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0143191648478 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145224582509 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0255994268544 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102371141454 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.