It is proven that elementary-aged children are obsessed with watching television and playing computer games. This essay will examine the adverse effect of this practice, and then offer some feasible solutions to it.
A child's prolonged exposure to television programmes and electronic games can lead to a host of problems for the child himself, his parents, and society. Concerning the former, this often makes children neglect homework, resulting in poor academic performance. This also means that in some countries such as the US where television programmes are highly sexual in their content, the incidence of vulgar language can increase greatly. with regard to parents, they could be upset and worry more about their children's development in late years as the scholastic performance may not be like what they expect. Finally, it would be more serious if shows containing sexual references may drive the children into sexually transmitted diseases and pregnancy.
Various steps, nevertheless, can be taken to mitigate the issue. First of all, emphasis should be placed on parents, which means that parents should spend more time participating in the selection of programmes to be viewed, co-viewing and discussing content with their children, and limiting time spent on playing console games and viewing television one to two hours per day. Alongside the restrictions from parents, teachers also play on important role in engaging children into extra-curricular activities, such as performance arts, drawing, creative writing and sports. These activities make better use of the children's skills, time and energy.
In conclusion, there are many negative consequences of children spending more time on watching TV and playing games for themselves, their parents, and on the societal level, but measure can be taken to redress the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, in conclusion, such as, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50704225352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88917838077 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2231077495 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328475740875 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115198777967 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655598047062 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210369501784 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570836869884 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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