: Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
It is true that nowadays business conferences and training are happening through the internet. From my perspective, while this phenomenon exists some drawbacks, I suppose that the advantages are inevitable.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantage for the enterprise when organize online training and meeting. The first reason is that a great deal of money is required to install security system protecting significant internal information. Especially, when the appearances of high level hacker are becoming more popular, the more sophisticated software for large proportion is, the more it cost. Another reason is that the lack of face-to-face interaction may be the most disadvantageous point which is considered one of success key in meeting. If staffs do not have chance to expose with other colleagues in real life situations, they will not able to build up strong relationships and royalty to the company.
On the other hand, online training and discussing have distinguish merits. Firstly, thank to state of the art technology, people can access to the internet easily, hence, video conferencing, for instance, can be carry out everywhere. As a result, instead of traveling for long distance, every attendance can join the conference from any place, which will save them a lot of expense and energy. Secondly, the internet is a great way for trainees and teachers exchange information conveniently. People can share, organize file and presentation easily and these files also be edited or revised by other members, facilitating collaboration within the whole team through social network or internal systems.
In conclusion, meanwhile online meeting and training still remain different pitfalls, I will argue that the merits of this method are more significant than the downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'distinguished'.
Suggestion: distinguished
...nd, online training and discussing have distinguish merits. Firstly, thank to state of the ...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...e distinguish merits. Firstly, thank to state of the art technology, people can access to the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44086021505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05011813997 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4871704777 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133762773028 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051868308276 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658984557911 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837568788139 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370266571897 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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