Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
It is true that the large proportion of criminals return to crime after they have been released from prison. there is some reason for the high recidivism rate, but there are solutions that could mitigate the problem.
I believe that there are two main reasons for the majority of re-offender. Firstly, many people have difficulties in finding employment. society would not offer employment to them, even though they are well-informed and proactive. When employers see their track record, they would be straightly rejected ex-criminal. As a consequence, ex-prisoner usually struggle to stand on their foot and they have to commit crimes again in order to their survival. Secondly, in prison, there is no appropriate educational system for the criminal to help them develop their skill for reintegration back into the community. The government lack of funds to establish these training courses for the prisoner, which lead them to be lag behind others and caused them to do another violent crime again.
there are something that should be done to solve this problem. One solution is a cooperation between the government and neighbor in establishing cooperative institutions. By hiring ex-detainees, these organizations could provide services to society, such as a mechanical workshop, saloon or cleaning facilities. another solution is equipping them with some useful skills, as cooking or mechanical during the detention period. Therefore, they would be beneficial for communities and societies.
In conclusion, while important reasons for the rate of re-offending can be identified, some solutions must be taken to deal with this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5157480315 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01985698984 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9400779152 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166143484923 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561262080168 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536512554565 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103176663922 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183783447189 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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