The responsibility to prevent global environment damage is on politicians rather than individuals. Do you agree or disagree?
Global environmental damages are near to reaching an irreversible point. Moreover, many countries suffer from dire consequences of environmental problems. Obviously, government and politicians have a vital role to reduce the human environmental footprint, however, individuals must be aware of environmental issues such as climate change. The truth is more complicated, especially owing to regulation laws and investment in energy sources.
Topping the list of government responsibilities is regulating laws to address environmental problems. To be more illustrated, enacting laws to offset carbon emissions is an urgent need. Clearly, huge factories emission bulk fumes into the air every day which is a serious problem. What’s more, with regard to government responsibility, the government should introduce green taxes to huge companies then these taxes must be spent on solving our environmental problems. These laws not only provide a budget to protect our environment but also enforced companies to be aware of environmental issues. On the other hand, some people believe that these corporations, in essence, with the help of their power and money have dominance over the government and the government does have not enough authority to enact strict law, while, the power of the people is more than anything else and they can push the government to change their policy to eco-friendly way.
From a financial point of view, the issue of environmental damage seems closely related to investments that carry on energy sources. To be more exact, a tremendous amount of investment is in the fossil fuel industry. In this matter, both politicians and individuals must encourage entrepreneurs to give primacy to renewable sources. At first blush, may be seen that just need governments to lay the groundwork to develop renewable energy sources but in this case, individuals have an important role to support companies that invest in renewable sources.
In the final, our environmental issues are at a dangerous level and politicians must take responsibility to alleviate this problem that leads to climate change, widespread flooding, and so on. However, politicians have a key and leading role. The role of the individual must not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
...ssions is an urgent need. Clearly, huge factories emission bulk fumes into the air every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, then, while, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50574712644 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18564001193 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0039445329 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.705882353 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097256987437 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369095818706 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341117205489 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687556731552 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245170670216 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.