The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the word costs numerous government's expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree?
The authorities are spending enormous money to rebuild old building hence lead to an argument whether the fund should used in construct new street and building or continuing reconstructed the old things. In this essay, i will represent my opinion about this situation.
On the one hand, restoration an ancient architecture help our country to protect culture building. Inheritance is the things represent for national faces. When other tourist visits one nation, they excited about finding that nation traditional, so aged building always is their destination. Due to, each individual need to have a responsibility to keep and conserve the relics they have.
On the other hand, with the path of development over the world, the union should consider on pedestrian accommodation such as condominium, house, street,... They need a comfortable place to have the best effective work. They earned money to receive things they deserved. Walk on a beautiful lane, lived in a cozy house and experienced the best things they have made. If the country construction delicate, your country seemed to have intensive growth.
Naturally, protect inheritance is importance but looking to news things and continuing improve the country construction to make citizen have a better life get comeuppance prioritize.
In conclusion, i believe that government should concentrated on advancement of news construction. Enjoy the pleasant and used it yo protect old building.
- Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions 73
- Some people believe that students should study at schools are better than studying in groups. However, others argue that students study at schools are better than they study on their owns. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 56
- The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced Summarise the informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features 56
- Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders To what extent do you agree or disagree Support your answer with specific reasons and examples 58
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the word costs numerous government's expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47555555556 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08320820567 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.25187611 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127883739988 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410826608774 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509891161921 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775374865907 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745764346849 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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