As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, ther eis an growing demand for more flights. What problem this does have on environment? What measure should be taken to resolve this?
Tourism is an industry which not only contributes to the economy of a country, but also it helps to understand the cultures of different nations. Tourism and the increased number of travelers resulted in escalating need of extra flights. There are various predicaments which I will discuss in this essay along with some solutions that can help this problem to alleviate.
Firstly, the main problem of this is pollution. While, tourism has many benefits, it also pollutes our pristine environment extremely. More travelers means more airlines and vehicles, and these will burn more fuel, which cause air pollution. For instance, the birds are dying and they have lost their natural habitat as well, due to the polluted air. Therefore, this air pollution is matter of concern related to this activity.
Another problem is the depletion of non-renewable resources. Increased travelling has raised the demand of the transportation, this expanded transport needs more gas to run their engines, which results in over-exploitation of natural resources. For example, a passenger flight can burn 1000 liters diesel in flying few kilometers. Thus, these resources are also in the danger of getting wiped out.
In order to mitigate these problems, some steps are needed to be taken into action to commence with. Government should foster ecotourism, and locals should also promote local-tourism and excursions instead of a voyage. Use of public transport should be encouraged rather than private vehicles.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that vast travelling can have adverse effects on environment, however, promoting ecotourism and use of public transits can help to ameliorate this difficulty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'travelers'' or 'traveler's'?
Suggestion: travelers'; traveler's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44696969697 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94271134261 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1722852225 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297139246877 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857808350796 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048540443655 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145323926329 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390115993056 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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