The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The pressure of modern life has affected many people. A Plethora of people believe that food convinces of modern life is a harmful thing in a long run. In my opinion, I
agree with this statement.
Firstly, these days people always look for time in their life as life has become modern, people are actually not finding time in their busy scheduled, which results in not eating healthy and no time for physical activities. Secondly,More often than not people eat junk food, a recent study conducted in IIT Bombay reveals that majority of student prefer cooked food instead of cooking as they can spend more time in studies.The case is not only for student half of the working professional also follow the same footsteps.
Surely, the fast food chains do provide convince, they eliminate the whole cooking process and now a days they even provide you with exciting offers and free delivery. Which lures people into eating unhealthy. Fast-food should be consumed sporadically and should always be the last resort, to stay healthy and maintain a good good physic.
In conclusion, the advantage of eating unhealthy junk food might seem good in short run, but it is deleterious to health in long run.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97044334975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5104793833 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9246868837 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204645963291 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857033129917 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447118449108 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108989068493 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476875641046 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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