The increasing trend of convenient food has been appeared in recent years due to its cost effectiveness which contributes to cope up with the technological world. However, these also create some problems which are relating to health issues that may be harmful in the long run.
In this competitive era, peoples are too much involved in their workforce most of their life time. So , the ready made foods become very helpful to save their precious time, as it is easy to carry. The most significant approach is that these foods provide instant energy and vigorous feeling with high productivity as well as supplying good tastes.
Nowadays, working parents tend to buy these items to reduce their stress. The ready foods have several varieties which attract parents to buy for their children. This widely appealed foods not only provide unique tastes but also have beneficial impact to travellars.
However, there are huge side effects can be happened due to these food items . It is knowned to all that junk foods have capacity to alleviate hunger but in the long term it has serious impacts on human body. Obesity, is the major concerning issue which brings lots of problems. Numerous disease such as, heart problems, liver damage and so on are the destructive causes of ready foods. But by decreasing the rate of consumption ,it is possible to lessen the severe impacts.
Having discussed this topic, it is understandable and conceivable that ready made foods may be better choice if it is not used on regular basis. By taking fresh vehetables and fruits , good health can be achieved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9962406015 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57395686349 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.982446795 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119945443121 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365682552976 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390320760193 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653206865613 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293300577448 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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