The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The major role of comfort food in people’s daily life who would like to adopt with modern lifestyle mostly in developed countries has grown in importance. This essay firstly will illustrate that preparing these types of food is quit convenient and quicker, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantages namely causing health problems is not valid.
Firstly, it is obvious that convenience food is more beneficial precisely for modern society. Wasting lessen time for cooking at home, people should consume these types of food; in fact, they not only can be made easier and faster, but also they are more affordable than meals which could be cooked at home. Further and even more importantly, though, comfort food has an extensive variety despite home cooked food which are mostly limited. In most European nations, as a salient example, 92% of locals eat comfort food daily; due to the fact that, these foods are completely easy made and affordable for all walks of life.
Nevertheless, some may contend that some serious health diseases such as obesity as well as high blood pressure could be considered as a main negative impact of convenience food on people’s physical health. However, there is no reliable evidence that prove this assertion. whereas, many of nutritionists, as an example, claim that, should these kinds of food have been made in sanitary conditions and contain some nutrient ingredients, they will be more beneficial rather than harmful.
By way of conclusion, although some may contend that convenience food is detrimental for health, it is clear that they are more advantageous.
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- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1825095057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75714955556 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1537635677 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141884759365 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653076821065 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313699490237 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928740268434 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360455025653 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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