The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle.what are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
People, nowadays, depend on ready-made food products to manage their fast-moving lifestyle. Although this has reduced the workload to a greater extent and saved a lot of time, I believe that the negative effects resulting from these food products are of greater concern than any benefits such dependance might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic advantages for people depending on convenience foods. Firstly, it tends to reduce the work burden since it eliminates home cooking, which is often considered to be one of the heavy household chores by many. Secondly, a great deal of time would be saved. Pre-cooked meals would often be ready to eat within two or three minutes of heating in a microwave oven, while the regular home-cooked meals would take more than an hour to prepare. For instance, the cup noodles, which became famous after being used in post world war 2, just take a minute to be readied, whereas homemade noodles might consume hours for its preparation.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages above, there are serious consequences that could result from eating convenience foods regularly. Firstly, in reality, people tend to buy fast foods considering their cheap cost and ready availability. These junk foods are rich in calories and harmful fats, which causes heart diseases. Secondly, these ready-made meals contain added artificial additives and preservatives. These chemicals are proven to be carcinogens by various studies. One such study was published by Oxford university citing the presence of stomach cancer-causing chemicals in restaurant foods.
In conclusion, disease-causing ability, especially the cancer-producing substances, far outweigh any advantages for people who depend on convenience foods to cope up with their fast-paced lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58241758242 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98852614038 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0119355063 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156279493423 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555421797767 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765915633286 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11415493973 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815756176344 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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