There is often much debate around the fact that the availability of readymade food has made it easy to maintain this modern lifestyle. I believe that the disadvantage of doing so mostly outweigh the advantages and this essay will outline the reasons why.
The main advantage of convenience food is that it is not time-consuming. Therefore people can use the time for other tasks like relaxing and doing other activities. Also, the productivity of study or work has enhanced. One example they often reference is that there is so many grocery store surround of school or workplace, thus one finds it convenient to have lunch with so many opinions to choose.
Despite these attractions, many drawbacks do exist. It may be unhealthy and unhygienic. Firstly, the standards of hygienic are not maintained in many street foods. this means that it could lead to so many diseases such as stomachache, cholera, and typhoid. In addition, it does not provide enough nutrition and contains preservatives that are harmful for body. For instance, the research found that people can suffer from cancer if abusing it.
In conclusion, time saving is the main advantage of fast food. But in my opinion, its disadvantages outweigh the advantages. It is recommended that people should give up their dependence on packaged food.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1023255814 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8927241302 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6622427163 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257611642476 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756335834526 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738229601446 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159327553903 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759563555523 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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