The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep with the speed of the modern Life style. What are the advanteges of this trend. Do the advanteges outweigh the disadvantages.
Since primitive times, food plays a vital role in everyone's life in order to stay fit and healthy. In this era, the demand of convenient foods such as instant noodles, soups are increasing throughout the worldwide. Although, there are various pros of easily available food as it is available easily, but there are also numerous cons of convenience foods. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both positive and negative points with their reasons before making a final note.
To commence with, there are myriad of disadvantages of instant food because there might be health disaster have stemmed from instant foods. First and foremost, processed foods are not prepared in appropriate supervision, while food manufactures use the low quality of ingredients in order to prepare these foods. If any person use these food in the higher quantity, then it might be bred many health ailments in their young ages like obesity, depression, digestive issues and many more. Furthermore, it is also vanishing any person's cooking qualities because everyone admires eating instant foods rather than home cooked food. As a result, people like to eat these food so, the demand of home cooked food are decreasing as person has fewer chances to make foods for their family members and friends. To exemplify, a survey conducted by The United States Census Bureau in California in year 2008 over a group of 2000 people ranging from 30 to 35 reveals that 35% of people said that they had lost their own cooking due to the invention of instant food.
On the other hand, there are various benefits of these foods. Primarily, it assists to save their time because it is easily available. To explain, as people do not need to enough time to make that delicious food, it is prepared within minutes. Since people like to eat Maggie in their houses, it takes two minutes to prepare them. If they eat that food, then they can save their time and use that time for in other productive tasks. Additionally, it is cost effective, however, people can save their money also.
To conclude, although there are various benefits of instant food, there negative cannot snub because it does not include minerals and vitamins that are need one's body to healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...d food. As a result, people like to eat these food so, the demand of home cooked food are ...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e, however, people can save their money also. To conclude, although there are vari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9335106383 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50342539213 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539893617021 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2289571605 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143834967915 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499148161801 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322155548353 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831221198772 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391943031091 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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