Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
English is a widely recognized global language without a doubt. It is often seen that region dialects are overlooked in many places in these modernized worlds. But it is obvious that if one should be sophisticated in life English plays a vital role. In my opinion, it is important for everyone to learn English at the same time it is equally important to preserve local dialect.
English has been spoken by over so well-advanced nations. Every individual has a keen to settle in such developed countries. In this case English speaking skills come in handy Most importantly, the nations such as US, UK, AUSTRAILIA, CANADA one major destinations for best education where English as their mother tongue, so one must be fluent in English to settle in those destinations. Moreover, one with good enough English command has the profound opportunity in life to lead comfortable life than one with not because many of the international organizations are doing trade with highly developed countries where the employee need to speak English comfortably.so the client gets clear idea and can share his views with ease. A person with ample of English knowledge has a great demand and have a chance to visit plethora places.
However, I feel the local dialects are on the verge of dying out. It is the responsibility of every individual to learn his/her mother language. Mother tongue is the best option to learn the ethics of their culture. For example, Ayurveda, a traditional healing practice is written in Sanskrit, as many now are preferring for natural cure there is a need for learning this ancient language. Adding this linguistics in school curriculum makes pupil aware of historical dialects, parents should also speak with their kids in their mother tongue and government must take special initiatives to preserve these dying languages.
In conclusion, however English is necessary to succeed in all walks of their local dialect. Both universal and regional languages have their equal significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14417177914 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85625486919 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4354614096 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0536915313874 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200731025846 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314015490668 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388404042119 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175941416754 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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