The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 41.998997996 2% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 31.0 1615.20841683 2% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 8.0 315.596192385 3% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.875 5.12529762239 76% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.68179283051 4.20363070211 40% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.08791163606 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 8.0 176.041082164 5% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.561755894193 178% => OK
syllable_count: 9.9 506.74238477 2% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 4.0 20.2975951904 20% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 1.5 49.4020404114 3% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 15.5 106.682146367 15% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 4.0 20.7667163134 19% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.06120827912 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0397168844824 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294348095798 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294348095798 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397168844824 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: -1.2 13.0946893788 -9% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 101.26 50.2224549098 202% => Flesch_reading_ease is high.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 0.1 11.3001002004 1% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: -0.7 12.4159519038 -6% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 2.0 78.4519038076 3% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 1.0 9.78957915832 10% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 3.6 10.1190380762 36% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 0.0 10.7795591182 0% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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