School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions diverse on whether children should learn a oversea language. In spite of the fact that many people positively find it beneficial for the young, I partly support that sentiment in light of some rational reasons.
Admittedly, schools often force students to learn advanced skills including foreign language as they think it would be necessary to improve their students in many fields of life ; however, this causes students to be more negatively emotional and lead to some problems for them to face. Firstly, the more they learn, the busier they become. Despite having too many subjects and homework, they still have to be accustomed to adding more and more other language knowledge into their studying process. Furthermore and more seriously, not only wasting their time, does it also put heavy pressure on children due to the enforcement, therefore they will not have enough time for entertainment.
On the other hand, instead of forcing, schools could encourage students because there are still benefits. First of all, They can vastly have knowledge about distinct countries' cultures. Therefore, it will be easier for them to confidently communicate with different-mindset-and-language locals. For instance, pupils would introduce foreigners to Vietnam when they are on a trip. Moreover, together with the received education, scholars are capable of standing a chance of studying abroad.
In conclusion, learning another language is wholly effective,so schools should stimulate their learners, not force them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57510729614 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13678998091 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643776824034 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8515383719 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166222764743 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636653840956 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070305330995 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121042140777 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649880936807 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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