In this competitive world, advancement in internet has made people's life more easier and faster than ever before. This has lead to a debate whether or not the children should send school to gain information. Although some people argue that there is no longer necessary to send children to school, it can be shown that there are stronger arguments opposing this view.
On the one hand,critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of not going to school is that it saves time and money to travel from home to school daily. For example, people , unlike in the past , now have immense options to study anythings they desire with the help of internet and this has helped children to save their money as well as time in a same way. Also, children don't has to get frustrated about their assignment to finish on time, especially they don't have to worry about their exams.
On the other hand, there are number of arguments in favor of my stance. One of the most important one is that, sending children to school helps them to learn communication skills but studying at home could make children more lonely and antisocial. Firstly, it will decrease their ability to interact with other children because school education provides opportunity for students to meet their peers as well, which is very important to their growth.They learn to cooperate with each other, respect everyone in the class and be tolerant in a non-virtue way. According to "Times Magazine December 2017 edition" the proportion of children who are not sending schools becoming antisocial increased from 20% to 60%. Secondly, In the school, young children can develop friendship with students from different families which could help children to develop interpersonal skills.
Lastly, in my opinion, the parents should take great initiative in educating their children in school rather than sitting in front of internet and learning at home.
In view of the arguments outline above, some can conclude that despite of having some merits, the disadvantages of e-learning are indeed to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ement in internet has made peoples life more easier and faster than ever before. This has l...
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... ever before. This has lead to a debate whether or not the children should send school to gain...
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Suggestion: , critics
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...ren to save their money as well as time in a same way. Also, children dont has to get frustra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07848837209 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64629586787 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9452659337 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.384615385 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222604698329 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777345120848 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466803242918 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116249121995 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367882087208 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.