In the modern era, the education play a vital role in individual life which helps to increase their skills, knowledge, personality and many more things. Some masses ponder school focus more on traditional subjects rather than others like computers but others oppose to it. Now, I disagree with the given statement and I will explain this statement in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, in the education level learners belong to different states and it should be necessary for authority to teach different subjects in the schools which enhance their skills as well as helps in their future. For example, some schools focus on cultural subjects like Hindi, Punjabi and English etetera such like Punjabi subject is compulsory for those educators who study in Punjab as well as other states also compulsory one subjects related to their cultural language. Also, most of the time students face problem to learn in ordinary subjects and they do not score good marks in their exams.
Moreover, if students learn various subjects in the primary education level then they choose their career better in their future. For instance, chemistry, Mathematics, Chemistry, Physics, English, Hindi and many more subjects are teaching by tutors in these days then after completed their schooling students can choose their subjects according to their interest even, it helps to choose their career according to their interest. Furthermore, the students learn basis things in their school level better than in higher education level.
In conclusion, everything has some pros and cons similarly learn a more traditional subjects in the schools also have some advantages and disadvantages but due to development of technology its a essential for the government to teach others subjects which helps to choose their career line in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...es but due to development of technology its a essential for the government to teach...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ut due to development of technology its a essential for the government to teach o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32302405498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60787387135 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1857499802 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.9 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155310484522 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713919925092 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259015842232 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104867141408 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253777649965 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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