Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments not private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments not private companies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, numerous research and inventions about science have played an essential role in humans’ lives. Many people assume that scientific research ought to be in charge by the governments in lieu of many nonpublic companies. To my way of thinking, those science's results should be controlled by the nation.
The first possible reason that the results of science should be owned by the governments is that national authorities can allocate more money for better facilities that help to support scientists and inventors. Take IPS Research in China as an example. The government there has invested approximately 50,000$ to buy the most modern scientific machines as well as developed the laboratories for scientists to create a new AI system. Consequently, scientists had adequate tools and modern technologies to finish the project.
Another significant explanation for the national authorities to take charge of the results of science is that several people could earn their living by selling their scientific inventions or ideas. To be more specific, when the governments control outcomes of the science publically all the citizens, including scientists and inventors, could pursue their interests such as doing scientific research, creating new inventions, and so on and then they could sell their products to earn their living. As a consequence, this not only helps people to make money but also develops society through many inventions and scientific ideas that have been created.
To sum up, while people hold different views about whether science's results should be controlled by the governments or private companies, I believe that the role of national authorities to lead scientific studies is significant for the above-mentioned reasons.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ent there has invested approximately 50,000$ to buy the most modern scientific machi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48529411765 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00702033253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3118036472 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.636363636 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204232387303 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801227381291 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545821676722 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138715338294 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338590636406 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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