The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings, Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
it is true that technology has played a vital role in modern society development nowadays and might replace human's existance with its man-made intelligence. however, whether this tendency has positive or negative impacts is still an on going debate. in my opinion, while there are some drawbacks, computers give our life numerous undeniable merits and i will explain my reasoning as following.
To begin with, technology has opend the door to automatic mobile which can save a lot of time and reduce human labour. For instance, many factories these days do not have thousand of workers anymore, but remain only a few skilled ones to control the whole system. As a result, people are demanding to access higher education for their jobs. Thanks to the vast upgrading of computers and smartphones, the limit of seeking information has been completely vanished. Thus, people can even go to anywhere they desire without hesitating of being lost and lack of accommodations through online maps and booking services.
On the other hand, it is only natural that we fear artificial intelligence surpass us and lose our position. human race is unique due to creativeness and sympathize so there will not be any machine can replace us in the future. we created machine as a tool to help make our life become more convenient. If we rely too much on such inventions and become addicted to it and slowly lose our important purposes, then, we are the one at fault. Or should there are any wrongdoings such as taken over control murderous weapons to fire nuclear bombs is the handiwork of those bad genius (e.g hackers...). Therefore, this would not be considered as a negative trend.
in conclusion, the advantages brought by evolution of machinery has been clear, so that we have to make adaptions in order to continue the flow of moving forward instead of being afraid and attempting to halt the absolute development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76726822652 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653125 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3519312998 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137381058398 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039956163379 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379074000641 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694113952208 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542453557976 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.