Scientists agree that many people are eating too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problems can be solved by educating people to eat less junk food. Other people believe that education will not work.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, it is true that fast food is becoming popular nowadays although it has negative impact on health. However, people differs in their opinion whether education helps to aware the mankind about the risky effects of junk food or some other alternatives. I shall put emphasis on both perspectives before reaching to my view.
To begin with, education is the most powerful weapon to solve all issues. As the teachers teach pupils about the harmful effects of junky food and aware them about the value of nutrient rich cuisine. Moreover, educators give real life examples to students about the people who eat hamburgers and pizza, suffering from obesity and other health issues. So that the learner can avoid fried food and concentrate on healthy food. As a consequence, they can maintain their health and stay away from diseases.
On the opposite side, it is not necessary that only education help the mortals to not to eat junk food. While it is the primary responsibility of the family to cook nutritional food in their house and let know to their children about the dangerous effects of westernized food. Furthermore, the government should take stringent initiatives to ban on fast foods as well as broadcast some programs which can give a message to public that not to take junky food while showing the pictures of people who spoil their body.
In conclusion, in my opinion the education is the one of the most best source to educate the well-being to not focus on junk food because they can know it in earlier age and stay healthy throughout the life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60609574849 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7020457918 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361267158284 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124115496008 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737599259933 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219169008464 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373580853429 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.