It is irrefutable that we have seen substantial development in technology. So, experts believe that computers will become more smart than human beings in upcoming time . Although more smartness of PC would lead to some drawbacks for individuals,I,However,believe that it has more advantages for society.
On the one hand , there are negative impacts that may be ameliorate by the more advanced computers in the future. First and foremost , it will trigger the rise of unemployment by replacing workforce. Because of fast working efficiency and minor chances of mistakes, companies would replace labour by them by virtue of which we may be seen escalate in the level of unemployment in the future time . Secondly, this development of computers would make people more lazy . The easy access of the computers allures masses to spoil the ample amount of time on it , in term of surfing on internet and scrolling down on many social apps . As a result, people would be more lethargic because of plethora of options and ease.
On the other hand , to the favour of advantages , I also assert that this trend of advanced technology would be more beneficial for individuals in society. Firstly, it would make business more convenient. To illustrate my point , now it have made easy for businessmen to access their work from the any part of the work by the single click of button . So , it would be become more advanced in future. In addition to this , this would be proven boon for some work fields where human beings can’t pursue job because of unfavourable conditions such as in high temperatures and in mines . For instance , we have seen many miss happenings of landslides during mining and lot of workers have lost their precious lives. Therefore, workforces of these dangerous areas would replaced by robotics that would control by the advanced computers.
In conclusion, while people would face some obstacles in getting jobs and would be more idle because of smart technology,I surely believe that these advanced gadgets would assist people in order to done intricate tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95307917889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83655488854 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513196480938 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 341.0 20.2975951904 1680% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1689.0 106.682146367 1583% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 341.0 20.7667163134 1642% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 162.0 7.06120827912 2294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215535505698 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215535505698 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153908451507 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050518067315 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 172.4 13.0946893788 1317% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -274.64 50.2224549098 -547% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 136.3 11.3001002004 1206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.25 8.58950901804 282% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 138.4 10.1190380762 1368% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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