Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?
Nowadays, the abeyance of global warming had become an anecdote to many people, who are reluctant to live abstemiously to save the gradually decreasing energy. However, issues like climate change and environmental contamination are deteriorating as the day progresses; in my opinion, we ought not postpone to take actions in order to encourage more people to save earth energy, which is for the future of mankind.
Firstly, the majority of people, who dissipate a large amount of earth resources and energy, are not fully aware of the severity of climate change. In other words, schools and communities should lecture people about the global warming and exacerbating world environment. For example, schools and universities in China have slogans and signs about the importance to save earth’s resources; notably, this casualness of warning will create a tense atmosphere among all teachers and students; therefore, this matter will always haunt in people’ heart, and carry out the duty of signs and slogans in their daily life. In this way, the awareness of global warming among all people will increase, and help to save the world’s energy.
Another reason is that the governments are loath to take actions because the authorities are dealing with other matters. Although there are no authorities in the world claimed that they will adjure the overcome of pollution nor shirk the obligation to other countries, the situation is conspicuous that the majority of governments in the world have not taken any actions. Nevertheless, some countries’ authorities have became the vanguards in fighting against the abominable climate change; for instance, France has already imposed a law to abrogate the selling and usage of gasoline vehicles in 2030; furthermore, the British government has enforced the law of abeyance of plastic in all fast food restaurants. As we can see, these countries that overcome all the difficulties of global warming are pioneers in the world. These authorities are models that other countries can follow.
In conclusion, school and community can spread the words and slogans of climate change in order to educate more people who live silk-stocking lives. Also, the government has an irremissible responsibility on forcing its citizens to save world’s energy by imposing laws. Overall, we must feel precarious in daily life that the mankind is in the abyss of sordid population, and the time of irresolution has gone, it’s time to take the actions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'postpone taking'.
Suggestion: postpone taking
...progresses; in my opinion, we ought not postpone to take actions in order to encourage more peop...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
..., some countries' authorities have became the vanguards in fighting against the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35189873418 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98032430441 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2464614144 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2142857143 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179789367646 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545842823344 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400889656958 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1014119759 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329959492427 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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