Scientists predict that humans will speak the same language in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? ?
Global conversation, at the turn of 21st century, has been an enormous change. People around the world tend to study more than two languages and it is predicted that it will level up to higher step by using the same language communicates in modern society as a whole. I agree with this viewpoint to what extent as in my opinion, regulating measures should be imposed to avoid degeneration of traditional characteristic.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that communication between different nation would be easier if every country cooperates and considerably set an official language. Conveying thoughts and information would be facilitated. For instance, English is normally used in addition to flow all business or even education, including primary school, secondary school and university. Moreover, international language is a tool to enhance workforces’ knowledge which makes foreigner confidentially invested in their countries in various ways such as tourism and industry.
On the one hand, unique culture would be the critical impact of inventing international language. Many local folks would not accept this due to they understand this would make them been a colony. Throughout the past, old languages were died by ignoring use and rejecting study from ancestors’ offsprings. This trend would happen again if individual languages are replaced by a standard tool. Besides disadvantages mentioned above, government should concern about incorrectly translates history standard official language in addition to misapprehension which write-in schools’ curriculum.
All things considered, though some people argue that unique culture in each country would be replaced by international language.. As far as I am concerned, culture might be entirely deleted if we use international language without consciousness about losing ancient civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ld be replaced by international language.. As far as I am concerned, culture might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, second, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74551971326 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33457409366 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2423751069 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.071982241898 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024124030182 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041551227985 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046613371737 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355798054542 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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