These days, People spend a lot of time in shopping. The group of young people, Especially, find it interesting and Good for time passing. This essay will provide an overview why they are attracted towards shopping and some alternative yet Profitable practices.
A big all begin with, there are numerous reasons of youngsters spending much time in shopping centers. Firstly, the gigantic Shopping malls, Colorful advertisements and a discount on favorite products Attract the interesting teenagers like magnets. To Illustrate, Dolman mall is the biggest Shopping center of my country and is always crowded, mostly with teenagers. Moreover, these malls provide Incredible shopping experience by providing customers Comfortable and brilliant services Such as luxurious sitting in shops. In result, people spend hours in malls amusing themselves. For an example, my friend loves window shopping in big and glorious malls. Hence, It is evident that youngsters cannot stop themselves from shopping for long hours.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that there are plethora of other useful Activities than shopping. The youngsters can be engaged in sports, Exercise And fitness In their extra time. In addition, People of this age may prove themselves productive and useful for society By spending time in planting trees, Helping old ones, Community work and much more. Thus, these people can be very profitable For own And for community.
To conclude, Shopping centers use different techniques to address people causing wastage of time of youngsters. I am of the opinion that rather passing time in malls, One should focus on physical fitness and community service in their free time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e alternative yet Profitable practices. A big all begin with, there are numerous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37218045113 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7433024017 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6479359508 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125173922795 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427670534926 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292362063798 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743836402281 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275164794072 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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