Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy. Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, the trend of purchasing items through online platforms has gained significant popularity. While there are certain drawbacks associated with this practice, such as the potential compromise of consumers' private information, I am strongly convinced that the advantages of online shopping far outweigh its disadvantages.
On the one hand, users of the internet may face the risk of their private information being stolen. this becomes a real possibility when online shopping websites require customers to provide personal details such as phone numbers, home addresses, and credit card information for payment purposes. However, when these websites have inadequate security measures in place, cybercriminals can easily exploit these vulnerabilities and gain unauthorized access to consumers' private information. For instance, in 2022 alone, over a million reports were filed by Vietnamese buyers on the shoppe platform due to deceitful phone calls from individuals posing as shoppe employees and demanding money transfers in exchange for participation in discount programs.
Nevertheless, I contend that these potential dangers are outweighed by the benefits of online shopping. it is undeniable that e-commerce has created a vast marketplace for sellers. From a retailer's perspective, they now have the opportunity to reach a significantly larger customer base across vast distances through online trading platforms. A noteworthy example can be seen with fruit farmers in Lao Cai, Vietnam. During harvest time, instead of solely relying on local markets for limited demand, these farmers can live stream their products on shopping platforms and receive orders from customers residing in various locations. Furthermore, the growth of online trading has led to an expansion in logistics and transportation services due to the increasing demand for package delivery resulting from internet transactions.
To conclude, despite concerns over potential privacy breaches associated with online shopping practices, it is evident that the benefits brought about by e-commerce are more substantial. In addition to this acknowledgment, it is imperative for governments to implement laws and regulations aimed at improving security systems implemented by such online shopping platforms.
- Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hed by the benefits of online shopping. it is undeniable that e-commerce has creat...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'retailers'' or 'retailer's'?
Suggestion: retailers'; retailer's
... a vast marketplace for sellers. From a retailers perspective, they now have the opportun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92469879518 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14337066549 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635542168675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8880428949 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282186076211 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832840746109 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455123538706 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165261403908 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159190980702 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.