"Should information widely be shared or kept as private property?"
there is often much debate around whether people ought to tell about facts of personal popularly or hold the secret as treasure. While it is often started that everyone has a great benefit to know about information , I am think that they should keep themselves secrets.
On one side of the argument there are people who believe that anyone can share any details to get worse quickly and that information is over to control however the details are not verify such as right or wrong. one example they often make reference is the community network who update a shocking event unclear then a lot of massive netizens are quickly spread it and that causes damage to the victim of story. According to these people , a social networking is a useful tools for people to communicate with them. Facebook is a social media page for every user in over the world. there are many advantages and disadvantages before they use and the users should consider it.
I would be inclined to argue against this as I believe both any the Internet user and any person should keep secret about themselves private information or simple speech. First, they should respect the person who tells them the secret. Secondly, they have to think smartly when using the website. Finally, it is widely known that the story is small or big, whether private or not, the owner of the story must approve the sharing . As such, confidential information will not be passed on to many people and friendships will always be good.
To sum up , there are strong arguments for and against sharing information. there are certainly pros of sharing has outlined . Trust and sharing will come together if people always know how to keep the secret at the right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79461279461 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41651990267 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2286222071 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164362617738 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529731122167 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461906827038 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981278545308 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656590362584 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.