Should unemployed people be made to work for their benefit payments?
Helping each other and care are characters of Indonesian people. We will be sad if we know that our family or neighbour is unemployed for a long time. Spontaneously, we are willing to offer a job for that people, for instance, working in our office or working for us in the house, to give welfare, benefit payments for them or opportunity as a cheap labour. In this essay, I will describe the advantages and disadvantages if we make unemployed people to take any job.
If we hire unemployed people, it will has a lot of benefits for the company. The first one is, we can pay them with a low salary to help our business, so we can be allocated the cost to other needs. The other advantages is, we do not have to give pension money, allowances, training or other facilities, because they are not permanent employees. For example, A new housing developers with a limited financial ability, they tend to hire unemployed people as an in-house marketing to promote their product. In this mechanism, they are able to pay them with a low salary. Furthermore, the company does not have to give a vehicle as well, because it is not their responsibility, in fact it can be part of the requirements for apply the job.
Even though hire jobless people can be beneficial for us, it has disadvantages as well. For example, the job is not suitable with their specialisation. For example, we need a driver in our company, offer the job to a people who out of work and he does not have a skill as a driver, we need to train him first, it will be an additional cost for our company. In addition, the long-term unemployed need assistance, so it is effectiveness.
So in my opinion, it is a good idea to make a jobless people work, because we can help them to survive and it can press an operational cost. A job which does not need a specialisation such as marketing, janitor or security, can be an option for jobless people, because it does not need a long time to learn how to do that job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45856353591 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86387225499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450276243094 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4418850773 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284456418926 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103387077665 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740685771396 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193755710435 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694803536153 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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