Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Corporal punishment to children has been adapted for the disobedient child in recent days. Some parents believe it is the one and only medium to teach them about discipline. This essay will argue why physical punishment is completely unnecessary.
On the one hand, Parents believe that spanking child will be helpful to make them bound by rules. They also have faith in their nurturing way as it might be the quickest way to learn their sons or daughters about the right and wrong. Moreover, smacking children petrified them and develop cautiousness not to any sort of misbehaviour. A recent study in Bangladesh shows almost quarter of parents succeeded to develop the sense of right and wrong among the children with the using of corporal punishment. Therefore, guardians prefer to punish the next generation to stop their uncouth behaviour and reinforce good behaviour.
On the other hand, Children might find this sort of punishment as belittling and teach to loath the parents which is completely unwanted. If a child continuously face physical brutality, he or she will definitely possess the same behaviour in future as perpetuates a cycle of abuse. Not only that, physical punishment also affects the child’s self-esteem. For instance, in India more than 50 percent child face acute mental disorder in early life for those punishment they faced. So, for the development of a child it is unacceptable to hit them physically.
This essay argued that parents who used corporal punishment to children have flawed understanding of its instant result but underestimate the long term consequences that is more devastating for child’s life. In my opinion, smacking children is definitely not the best method to discipline them as it will make them fell worthless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this punishment' or 'those punishments'?
Suggestion: this punishment; those punishments
...acute mental disorder in early life for those punishment they faced. So, for the development of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1958041958 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88833199859 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.146197652 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077790942002 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298519720089 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497112072357 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574219391436 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046771692357 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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