The evolution of worldwide business is all set to be challenging for some small enterprises due to some considerable factors behind it. It is stated that huge international firms are becoming responsible for extinction of some businesses. I think both positives and negatives of this trend are equal and both will be explained prior to reaching to conclusion.
To start with, multinational business has been providing a huge range of flexibility and convenience to common people who are attached with it. In other words, usage of social media by organizations has made the services most superior than in past which attracts a large number of customers. For example, Amazon is an international company and it constantly spreading further due to having certain superficialities like fast online delivery, affordable prices, and good quality of products. All these qualities made this firm tremendously prioritised all around the globe. The another positive of foreign business is that introduction of unique ideas regarding how profits can be accomplished in business. Hence, it is clear that how increasing worldwide business proving boon for people as well as enterprises.
On the dark side, small businesses are on the way of disappearance due to being impacted by multinational firms. One of the noticeable disadvantage of this trend is that common businessman are facing financial losses under the circumstances of less prioritisation from people. For instance, in India, many companies have extincted because of having the least workers who continuously moving from these companies in search of betterment in terms of salary. The other negative is that workers of small companies attracted by large firms which offering them reputed jobs and smart money. Therefore, it can be said that little businesses poorly affected with ongoing spread of foreign organisations.
As it can be concluded, the replacement of small companies superficially helping the people in numerous ways. However, on the other side it also creating darkness for those who supposing to open their own business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43865030675 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15330410989 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8417047729 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272848421225 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808753251257 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677013255614 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157262126358 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648868502691 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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