From the last few decades till the modern times most of the societal problems are associated with the young ones under the circumstances of parents negligence towards their growing children's. It is stated that in these days, parents are spending less time with their toddlers due to their jobs which forcing the youngers to get into social issues. I totally agree with the statement and my total agreement will be articulated in upcoming paragraph before reaching to conclusionn.
It is noteworthy to mention that rise in social problems is linked with the youngsters owing to some reasons. The main factor behind this is that lack of parental supervision always responsible for making the youngsters wrongdoers. For examples, in Australia, according to research approximately 90% parents are giving most of their time to work instead of spending time with children's and young ones constantly choosing the wrong paths without having any knowledge which sometimes make the toddlers criminals and it is enough to prove that why youngsters are indulging in wrong things.
In addition to this, the other reasons beyond this is that being deprived from basic knowledge in formative years and that is the pivotal responsibility of parents which is often leaved by parents under the work pressure. For example, in India, majority of young ones are doing wrong things, in which several bad works are included such as taking drugs in growing years, living study, bad peer groups, and stealing things from people. As a result, carelessness of parents destroys the life of their toddlers. Therefore, it can be said that parents can't expect good doings from youngers without providing them knowledge before.
In conclusion, after the analyzation of total agreement from my mind, social problems are increasing day by day, however these prevailing circumstances can be solved if parents provide appropriate attention towards their children's in order to save their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26198083067 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71285328135 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5678854907 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.727272727 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239803575269 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915154062861 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051244650575 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148582538364 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041795395878 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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