With the development of automatic devices such as smart phones or televisions, it is very convenient for people to access any sort of information within a fraction of a second. Apart from having several apparent advantages which have assisted in making people’s life run smoothly, it has numerous disadvantages which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the usage of smart equipments mostly comes with multifarious shortcomings. One of the major drawbacks is the deteriorating health conditions among individuals. To explicate, in the contemporary era, due to easily accessibility of mobile phones by youngsters, they tend to spend most of their valuable time in watching series or playing games. Therefore, it gives rise to damaging their heath which includes backpain, low vision, and migraine in severe cases. For instance, a study conducted by Health Care department in The Unites States in 2018 among teenagers revealed that almost 60% of them were hugely were affected by the continous usage of mobile phones. Not only does it incur a few detrimental consequences, but also develops addiction of checking cell phones time and again.
Furthermore, it is often argued that the information available on the internet is sometimes unreliable. As nowadays, travellers mostly utilize smart phones to navigate to unknown or new places, there are high chances that they may end up at nowhere due to wrong navigation paths shown over there. To illustrate, the remote locations in Google maps have very blur information, and most of the time, it misguides the user to locate any village or remote town. Additionally, because of utmost dependency on smart applications, the trend of interaction with acquaintances, family members or relatives has shown sliding graphs. For example, masses rather utilize google assistance or Siri in Apple devices to interact than with their kins or dearones.
In conclusion, despite having apparent uses of smart devices, its disadvantages may not be ignored which include damaging health effects, unreliable information and least human interaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'blurred'.
Suggestion: blurred
...mote locations in Google maps have very blur information, and most of the time, it m...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their kins or dearones. In conclusion, despite having apparent uses of smart de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42771084337 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05665167558 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635542168675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1696668755 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144079283681 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445844873366 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365235698953 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904954154498 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337914086744 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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