Smokers can cause themselves serious health problems. The choice to smoke is made freely and with knowledge of dangers.
Smokers should therefore expect to pay more for medical treatment than non-smokers.
it is certainly true that smoking is vary dangerous . therefore smokers have to get medical help frequently than non-smokers.
firsts of all, people who smoke are prone to get ailments such as, lung cancer . In other words, coughing is very common during exhaling nicotine , thus they have to go for medical treatment to relieve the symptoms of cough . secondly, second-hand smoking could cause deterioration to persons who came in contact of nicotine inhalers . Hence, they need to see a doctor to correction their health . Ajay, for instance , was smoking since 2 years and suddenly got asthma . Then he need to appoint a nurse to take care at home for every moment.
non smoker ,however , are not prone to suffer with diverging illnesses as smokers. they only fall ill with other causes such as pollution, weekend immunity . Mankind who are not inhaling smoking are able to stay healthy for long time .
To conclude, from my up yo date experience and surveillance i can locate that , smokers have to take medical help more than non smokers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61587180364 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4776424268 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.25 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267191641643 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879313320907 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653535084498 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170547210178 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387424769096 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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