Smoking not only harm the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. Do you agree or disagree.
Irrefutably, it is a fact that if health is gone, everything is gone. In the epic era, the trend of smoking is continuously increasing day by day. It is not only harmful for smokers, but also for the people who are living around them. It is claimed that, smoking should be stricted in the public areas. I completely agree with this statement and this essay would shed light on the adverse effects of smoking in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with the favour of statement, there are abundant of factors behind this why sizzling is dangerous for consumers, who are smoking. The first and foremost factor is that, it arises some serious diseases such as tuberculosis and lung cancer. However, it is also a biggest problem of environmental pollution. The smoke which is arises by smoker, is mixed with the air and cause air pollution. Owing to this reason, numerous folks suffer plethora of breathing problems. For illustration, it is observed that over half of the population is suffering dangerous health issues due to smoking. So, it would be fair to say that smoking should be banned in public regions.
Moving further, scorching has detrimental effects on both, the smoker and the people in his surrounding. Fume which creates by smokers, enters in the lungs of the masses through air, who are living with them. Because of this fume, they also faced health problems. Although most of the smoking products is composed with the help of some harmful chemicals such as nicotine, yet this trend is increasing from some yesteryears. For example, according to the survey, it can be observed that, 90% of the people faces various health diseases due to smokers who are living around them. So, it has adverse effects on both these persons.
To conclude, I believe that, due to detrimental influences, smoking should be banned in public arenas. If this issue does not stop now, then it will create a major problem in the future.
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| 2021-08-14 | Gurjinder kaur 01 | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...is and lung cancer. However, it is also a biggest problem of environmental pollut...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...s issue does not stop now, then it will creates a major problems in the future.
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
... stop now, then it will creates a major problems in the future.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87841945289 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64032810263 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516717325228 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2832223404 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257044495148 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761878903683 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856409628747 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171586103618 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488374625155 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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